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Bare Your Fangs

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Bare your fangs, vampire:
And drain me just a little more.
Expose me to your biting reprimand,
and use me up to the final extent...

But don't stop there,

Vampire Dear;

Bleed me dry and excuse yourself on leaden lies.

Destroy me

With an utter lack of care:
And treat me with the contempt of an inferior.
Resolve yourself of all personal responsibility of
just how we got here......


Nefarious Demon



                                                                                              Ruthless Menace.
                                                                                 
                                                                                           


But remember;

                                            Dear vampire,

                           the soul you drain is tainted;
          and the blood you drink is poison.

So have at it:

Cruel denizen



Take not your fair share but everything you possibly can...

And we shall see who is still standing at the end.
I am my own person and more than that I understood things better than they ever realized and they can blame me all they like but a person knows when they are being taken advantage of and when someone can only think of how to squeeze more money out of them when they're supposed to care about you instead treating you like a maid and a personal clean-up crew.

Glad I got out of that situation but I am embittered by the experience.

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Rose-Em's avatar
Hi! I'm Naktarra from GrammarNaziCritiques, here to give you a little feedback on your poem today.

First off, I want to say I really love this poem. If it wasn't a tad obvious from my icon, I'd pounce on any type of supernatural-horror poetry with joy! You imagery is amazing and I love how you've left the readers at just the right amount of imaginative interpretation of the exact situation you are talking about. Literal or metaphorical vampire, this is absolutely great!

Keep it up, because I'm super impressed by the way you've worded everything, to the way to brought in a dramatic touch with your formatting.

Happy writing! :writer: